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(A poem I wrote very quickly as an introduction to a student film. But scrapped because it wouldn't fit. How does it work as a rough draft of a poem though?

any critiques accepted!


Motion is the physical embodiment of
the harmonies and melodies in music
It suggests a multidirectional rhythm
As well as a pacing of time in events
Motion is physical symbolization of change
As change is an essence of wonder
As humans existing in the modern civilization
We move too quickly to observe these
Choreographed moments of objects and time

As time has become a more precious relic
Only the most necessary ideas survive
A situation forced upon the bumbling masses
As the beateous movements of the world
Go unseen.

Yet these movements are ever obvious
As they compose the medium of my thoughts
They are pictures of objects slowly guided
By music playing silently in my mind
The following are thoughts as they appear
As rhythmic displays of narrative movement.

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