Yeah, the tone leads to questionable motive, as it already seems very carefully worded.
It certainly has a bit of a, "the Mexicans are taking over my country" feel to it.
There are ways to make some of these points (like that when my grandparents came over here from Russia and Italy, they set to learning English as it was the prevailing language) without it sounding quite so obviously that you're just yelling at all the hispanics. I mean, she's writing this in California... her words make it obvious that she's not talking about immigrants in general, she's lamenting all the ones who live around her.
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