Her lips are probably airbrushed to be as abnormally large as they are. There's something artificial-looking about her jawline, too. If you're still working on this, I'd suggest de-plumping her lips a bit and maybe adding a little softness to her jaw.
Is it just me, or is the "before" a whole lot hotter than the "after"? Might just be me. I like freckles.
