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the first picture looks like she's casting a spell on some blue glowey thing.
The second picture looks like she's throwing laundry around.
We need to at least see the glowy thing in the second picture so we know it's a mirror.
It is not at all obvious that the thing above her head to the left is a mirror. In fact the picture tends to draw your eye to her back, because of the red, and then make the eye circle around the purple whatevers. The eye will not tend to fall on the "mirror" until much later, if at all.
Then there's the problem that the display case is perfectly square in pic 1 and some sort of strange hyperdimensional rectangle. . .thing in pic 2.
Plus, the display case does not at all represent any sort of real display case - - -i.e. who has a display case with a mirror on the flat surface inside, and another mirror on the wall of the case, and that is some sort of weird warpy blue glass which is flush with the stand on the left side and sinking into it on the right?
The girl herself is not bad at all - in fact the sense of motion from the purple laundry in the second picture is quite good - -- but the supporting objects ruin the pictures as the viewer sits there trying to figure out what's going on.
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