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Old 08-01-2006, 12:07 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Nice overall layout and concept. If I could offer some constructive criticism...

The white lines in the standing figure are a very stark white, and therefore the figure looks a little "slapped on." If you have that figure set up in layers (which if you don't, I highly reccomend it for future projects) you can blur the edges a bit, or perhaps change the white to a light tone of blue, pulling it from the background. Or perhaps do both?

Good job.
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