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Old 03-26-2006, 05:01 PM   #3 (permalink)
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i agree with pollo on both accounts...
great style, but a bit difficult to decipher what's ahappenin'.

if you're looking for some critiques,
i'd say try to give the monsters a darker red outline
so that their edges can be distinguished from the bird,
and maybe give the bird some little birdy feet.

edit: and hey....
that looks a little like my avatar...
are you trying to eat me?
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