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vjssy · 03-10-2006, 02:27 AM

the 1st pic, many things are distracting - the flakes on the left, the whole dock, I dont think they're necessary for the picture to work. The 2nd pic, it would have been nice to get the woman more central to your picture (and focused as well) - the composition works better than the first, i think. the 3rd pic I like the best - you have a very nice range of colors (contrast filter used?) the guitar and some parts on the left could use a bit of dodging, and it would be nice to have a tighter grain (it may be the scanner, or the contrast filter if you used one. there's no helping it if it's just the film). I would work on that 3rd one, though. I really like it. Good luck with your following prints!

03-10-2006, 02:27 AM	#14 (permalink)
vjssy Upright Location: Glendale, CA	the 1st pic, many things are distracting - the flakes on the left, the whole dock, I dont think they're necessary for the picture to work. The 2nd pic, it would have been nice to get the woman more central to your picture (and focused as well) - the composition works better than the first, i think. the 3rd pic I like the best - you have a very nice range of colors (contrast filter used?) the guitar and some parts on the left could use a bit of dodging, and it would be nice to have a tighter grain (it may be the scanner, or the contrast filter if you used one. there's no helping it if it's just the film). I would work on that 3rd one, though. I really like it. Good luck with your following prints! __________________ Me saepe mone.