My add'd poems, inspired on the moment...
I dont usual post my poetry, and I dont believe I have posted any on tilted so I thought that it might be good to give it a try, any responses would of course be appreciated whether productive critisizm or otherwise.
1# Bright Night
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My soul shines bright,
cought in the everlasting,
cold-burning dark night,
without feel nor sight.
Beams of ever color,
light the better way,
a way to follow,
on a dark day.
As darkness gives way,
good is found again,
with hope as a freind,
eternal, never to end.
2# Family lost.
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Lost in night,
the light blight,
oblivion in like,
with stars inside.
In the dark,
I was caught,
resigned in life,
to regain sight.
You where wrong,
there was no light,
no freinds and family,
to save from blight.
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Last edited by cybersharp; 03-02-2006 at 09:53 PM..
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