This is very beautiful, full of heavenly imagery.
However, I got lost in the gap between these lines:
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Originally Posted by stevie667
...Begot a deepest burial,
Such things as would be destroyed,
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I do not wish to imply that the poen is lacking, only that my understanding is. Would you care to clarify?
Thank you
(From the depths of my fibre
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