Shoe, having gone through a bit of a learning phase, I'm finding out what pleases me and what doesn't.
I've realised I don't need a story.
I don't need to see a 'balanced' image or one that is technically correct to design principles.
However, somethings that might have worked better:
1) More depth of field.
This seems to be a good example of a nice landscape, if only for the hues in the clouds.
Most awesome landscapes have huge depth of field due to them being taken with Field cameras like 10x10s. They get it from their enormous F64 apertures and such.
This is one shot crying to be stopped down and on a tripod.
2) Crop.
The chain is a bit distracting.
3) In a picture that isn't meant to tell a tale or make you ask questions, leave out stuff that makes you wonder what it is.
Get rid of the white fluff in photoshop or similar.
4)Horizon.
The sunset clouds lead me off to the left and make me wonder what I missed. It looks like a beautiful scene, but half captured.
Ok, enough criticism.
I will admit, you exposure is good.
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