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These are excellent, excellent. The feel of the language is soothing and calm. I agree with Kramus, I like the fact that you don't write "torn soul" poetry. I especially like the poem in post #11, though I'm not sure it needs the last stanza. I love this line in particular:
"... and the cat on the windowsill
Our own little peeping Tom"
And I would certainly buy your book if you were published.
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