Great stuff! Thanks for that. I really appreciate the time you took.
I like to think my prose is okay, but I do make a fair few grammar slips. Then again, I know it's not grammatically correct to begin sentences with 'and' or 'but', but it's almost like our natural cadence nowadays, so in conversational pieces like this, I think it's acceptable to reflect it. I never really take much time to care about punctuation, as long it sounded okay in my head, so this kind of feedback is very much appreciated.
Thanks again.
Edit: Would 'has finally arrived, after...' be acceptable, grammatically speaking?