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Originally Posted by Eweser
It crept along on silent feet, stalking the lamb through the trees. The mountain lion hadn't had a meal in days, and the cub back in the den was crying in hunger when she left it an hour ago. As she gets closer to her prey, blood and death are waiting like a raven in the sky. She is almost ready to pounce, just a little closer. She leaps, the muscles in her body quivering. As she strangles the lamb by slowly tightening her jaws, she is relieved that she, and her cub, will make it a few more days.
This is my first time to participate in the writing challenge. I hope this meets the requirements and I realize it's not great, or even good, but I enjoyed the opportunity to use my imagination.
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Very good, I like the detail and description.
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She leaps, the muscles in her body quivering.
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Absolutely poetic narrative. 
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I just love people who use the excuse "I use/do this because I LOVE the feeling/joy/happiness it brings me" and expect you to be ok with that as you watch them destroy their life blindly following. My response is, "I like to put forks in an eletrical socket, just LOVE that feeling, can't ever get enough of it, so will you let me put this copper fork in that electric socket?"
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