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Originally Posted by tecoyah
One solitary
salty tear follows my cheek,
making its way from
eye to mouth to tongue and back
again, all be cause of you.
Fantastic.....the split of be cause was brilliant
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...I can't really take credit. I didn't intend to split it out. I had been counting my syllables and forgot to re join the word. Which I ended up doing in a way I thought was simply editing but it ended up re-posting it. But thanks for the intended compliment.