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Chilled inferno, Red, Drywall, and the two following bits are my favorites. You have the gift of knowing how to describe things in unseen, unusual ways that beautifully capture the feeling or thing. Excellent.
Extra care , these fragile wings
aloft in thought
downy feathers insight brings
and nested visions I have sought
The wind beneath my body sings
a song in my mind caught
the words a thousand different things
all the demons I have fought
one only hopes its not for Naught
Blessed be the blade is keen
The hands that hold it true
For in my mind I play the scene
Of what he means to do
A little snip is all it takes
Some thread to make it stick
My little swimmers now have brakes
And still I have my Dick
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