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Ah, sorry about that - The English class I'm taking is based around writing about the Just War theory, so my target audience (i.e. classmates and teacher) have a good understanding of what the Just War theory is. Essentially the Just war theory is a philosophy that gives moral standards to the decision to wage war, and the ways in which a war must be waged in order to be Just.
While I may not be able to convince you on whether it's actually Just or Unjust, I'm mainly looking for thoughts on writing style, where sentences could be changed up, confusing sentences, etc.
Since this is just an English class and not necessarily a history class I can fudge my paper a little bit to prove a point.
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I got in a fight one time with a really big guy, and he said, "I'm going to mop the floor with your face." I said, "You'll be sorry." He said, "Oh, yeah? Why?" I said, "Well, you won't be able to get into the corners very well."
Emo Philips
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