If it's a rhetoric class, you want to be setting your quotes according to MLA guidelines, unless your professor has specified a preference for the APA. Remember, any quote longer than 3 lines gets off-set.
Here is my favorite website for MLA style:
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/handou...rch/r_mla.html
You definitely need to break up your paragraphs. Just looking at them scares me away. I also noticed some issues with punctuation--forgotten commas, an oddly placed semi-colon...go back over it and look thoroughly to see what you might have missed.
As a side note, Ben: for a 400-level paper, he should be consulting between 5-10 sources, with a preference towards print. More sources never hurts though
