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Originally Posted by amonkie
old man sitting on the corner
a worn cap in his fragile hands
sure this was the place she said
that bench at half past two
clock to chime the hours passed
and still he sat to wait
she'd have a flower in her hair
if she remembered again today
as dusk he finally went inside
stopped a nurse down the hall
"have you seen my wife" he said
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This was amazing.....emotions in me felt it clearly
I do so love the way you write.....among other things