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I agree with Kramus, but also I find that there's something too angular about the women. That's ok on men but you have to have some softer curves on women to show their roundness. The shading has been done in parts in an angular way also, maybe you should practice shading in a circular motion to get you into the habit of not marking lines into your shading. You draw very well, keep practicing. Also, the better your materials, the better the final result.
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Whether we write or speak or do but look
We are ever unapparent. What we are
Cannot be transfused into word or book.
Our soul from us is infinitely far.
However much we give our thoughts the will
To be our soul and gesture it abroad,
Our hearts are incommunicable still.
In what we show ourselves we are ignored.
The abyss from soul to soul cannot be bridged
By any skill of thought or trick of seeming.
Unto our very selves we are abridged
When we would utter to our thought our being.
We are our dreams of ourselves, souls by gleams,
And each to each other dreams of others' dreams.
Fernando Pessoa, 1918
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