First off, I love that nose. Noses are one of the toughest parts to draw and I think you just nailed it. The eyes and the overall facial features all look pretty good, too. My only problem is with the hair. Besides it looking stringy, the page is cropped a little too tightly so it makes the overall shape of her head appear to be skewed, If we could see more of the head it would improve the image. I understand tight crops from an artistic point of view, but when you're still in the learning process you shoudln't limit your drawing so much. When you have the entire head there, it's easier to see where your proportion problems are.
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