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'The blizzard that you choose to live,
has left you somewhat broken
I think of words that were unsaid,
and feelings left unspoken'
^this is a very strong stanza, it stands out for me from the rest of the poem. Personally, (i'm probably being needlessly pedantic here, but in the spirit of constructive criticism...) correcting the grammar would make it feel more poignant.
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