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Your poem that begins 'moonlight bliss drenches the shadow' is easily my favourite of the more recent ones. I can't comment on ALL of them, but the imagery in this is significantly more effective than 'unblind eyes now used to see
directions shift so lifted breeze'. One thing i've noticed is that sometimes your poems don't have a tangible message. I'm not suggesting you write narrative poems, just that sometimes they seem a little obscure and inaccessible because of the evidently very personal nature of them.
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