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Old 08-09-2005, 02:01 PM   #9 (permalink)
J.R.V.A.
Junkie
 
Location: Utah
Technically, the words I and eye are homonyms.

I post for all the board to see
The attributes I possess
It's clear to see who I am
In various stages of undress
Some are plain
Some are regal
And some are considered 'art'
I take great pride in what I do
To set myself apart
Take the time to have a look
And you notice the true me
So that next time when we speak again
You will know I am a 'she'

I really like this, although the line

"And you notice the true me"

Would seem to flow better with
"You'll notice the true me"
Just my thoughts...


Aye I say, as you see I
Through eyes of yet another
If I had read your work you see
I'd know you wern't my brother
A sister maybe or just a friend
That writes with a smooth prose
A woman yes but nonetheless
I have'nt seen your dress
I seem to be a bit bashful
although your words are clear
I'll know from now on that you are
A she and not a man
__________________
And as she plays,
her sweet song of laughter
floats through the air
and warms my heart

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