"your teeth are like a flock of shorn ewes..."
for some reason, that part made me laugh.
i think sheep are just funny.
my own immaturity aside,
i can see why you like this passage.
the love and devotion are beautifully stated.
great work all around.
here's a thought that <i>might</i> make it even greater.
just my opinion, so take it at a mere suggestion.
what got me most was the repetition of "behind your veil"
i think this is a line worth emphasis in the drawings.
the first drawing does a great job of it....
the figures behind "the veil" of text and blackness.
the other two seem to lack this depth.
perhaps it could be something as simple
as a translucent tissue paper.
or a very light watercolor wash.
if you do continue on with the series,
please share your progress.
