Originally Posted by KellyC

Judging from the way you draw, I'm guessing you draw it pretty quick right? Also, the lines are heavy and rugged, you want it to be smooth and thin. I suggest you use another pencil instead of a regular # 2 pencil.

Start out by drawing everything as light as possible. This way if you mess up, you can erase it easily without smearing or leaving marks. Do this until you are satisfied with the drawing then gradually make it darker.

Any way, that's my $ 0.02, I'm not a pro, I'm still learning but that's my method of drawing so you might wanna take it with a grain of salt.

Edit: sweet! I inspired someone

Originally Posted by El Pollo

I love those eyes, individually. But you're right, they don't quite go together. But the detail and shape of each eye individually looks really good. And as for the sharp lines, I like them, but I'm more of a cartoon inspired guy and I've never been good at the realism thing. But if you're going for realism, yeah, use different pencils and smooth the shafdows out. Or just try to style it up a bit so that it's not realism and not cartoonish.