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Matt Arden · 07-13-2005, 04:45 PM

I like it.

I used to draw a lot. I'm better than most people but far from a professional artist.

If I was you I would draw in the hair. Without it, her right eye looks a little funny. I'm not sure that in real life you would be able to see that much of the edge of it. Because of her hair its hard to make out the eyelashes that would be there. Also drawing her hair would make a dark background and would make her face pop out of the picture more.

I think her cheek could be rouned off a little more. To make it "rounder."

I'm not entirel sure if this would make the pic look better, but maybe draw the irises in her eyes. I know you can't see them too well in the pic. But maybe that would make her eyes look more real.

I would recomend picking up the book Drawing on the Right Side of the Brain. It's a very good book that helps you to understand how to better draw what your eye sees.

I like how you drew her teeth. Most people would try to draw each individual tooth.

This is good for a begginer. Very good for only your fourth drawing. Keep it up.

07-13-2005, 04:45 PM	#2 (permalink)
Matt Arden Upright	I like it. I used to draw a lot. I'm better than most people but far from a professional artist. If I was you I would draw in the hair. Without it, her right eye looks a little funny. I'm not sure that in real life you would be able to see that much of the edge of it. Because of her hair its hard to make out the eyelashes that would be there. Also drawing her hair would make a dark background and would make her face pop out of the picture more. I think her cheek could be rouned off a little more. To make it "rounder." I'm not entirel sure if this would make the pic look better, but maybe draw the irises in her eyes. I know you can't see them too well in the pic. But maybe that would make her eyes look more real. I would recomend picking up the book Drawing on the Right Side of the Brain. It's a very good book that helps you to understand how to better draw what your eye sees. I like how you drew her teeth. Most people would try to draw each individual tooth. This is good for a begginer. Very good for only your fourth drawing. Keep it up.