Once you mentioned the sleep and rush of water... it gave some sense of form to the darker areas - especially in the last section you posted. That'd be an avenue to explore in detail contours.... but I love the lifting of spirit from body - very subtle yet it speaks volumes.
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Calling from deep in the heart, from where the eyes can't see and the ears can't hear, from where the mountain trails end and only love can go... ~~~ Three Rivers Hare Krishna
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