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Hey, Hey. I just read CyberTooth. I really like it. I love the line about is this how god created the universe? My only thing is... the paragraphs are really short. It's fine. It's just kinda odd and when published will look strange. I love the story and hopefully you'll write more soon! I really enjoyed it. Thanks.
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