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Originally Posted by amonkie
Great stuff here, Cellophanedeity. I especially love the door one, and these lines
" With the way she opened to everyone
And the way she creaked in the wind"
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Me too! But I liked the message of the first stanza best. These are all quite good. I like how your first sets a mood and atmosphere to it as well.
Asta!!