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I like in particular:
We should go out for coffee or something
I don't know if you drink coffee
But it seems like the thing to do
I also like how the rhythm breaks at some points. Don't know how much nitpicking you want from my side but if you want a stanza by stanza critique shoot me a pm or something.
I like it very good overall.
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