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I'm agreeing with most of what abaya is saying- it's all in the details. I had to learn how to talk erotically/dirtily over the phone, when my girlfriend and I were separated, owing to going to colleges in different time zones. At first it felt kind of dumb, trying to describe what I wanted to do to her, but quickly we both got into it. My favorite part is describing foreplay and undressing her. To be effective, you need to think about a sexual experience with her that you really enjoyed, and then maybe break it down and note why it was so good. Was it when you teased the edge of her panties and slid a finger underneath? Did you attack her with ferocity and feel the muscles in her legs and body strain against you? Chances are that she enjoyed the things you did and do to her. So focus on those actions, and try to describe them with more than just action verbs. 'Lick' is good, but adverbs to accentuate the motion will add a lot. Like abaya said also, keep the focus on her enjoyment- after all, you're writing TO her, so tell her why SHE will like it. One final thought, I think the line between erotic and pornographic blurs the further you get into it. So in the beginning, there's lots of descriptions and teasing and getting her aroused, and as you move forward in your evil plot, the action can get more and more explicit, til you're straight-up slamming her cunt. Anyway, my two cents.
By the way abaya, good song for a signature.
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