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Originally Posted by abaya
If you're lucky, OneSnowyOwl will make an appearance and drop a sample line or two... she's pretty amazing with the erotic writing.
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Aww...thank you, I'm touched, I truly am.
I recently began writing erotic works and I can say from the feedback I've received that 1) you want detail, but not TOO much (not the REAL nitty-gritty), 2) use the vernacular words to describe body parts (tits, cock, ass, etc.--anything else just sounds weird, in my opinion), and 3) personalize it. Focus on feeling. How would it feel to actually be in those positions?
It means more if it comes from you. I can give you pointers, I can proofread, I can help you spice it up. But if she knows YOU wrote it yourself...that's more powerful than the words themselves.