The art director made similar suggestions to make the work go better. The Title has been removed and a graphic designer who is good with typography will do it.
Thanks again to all. I am trying to get into the illustration field so popular opinion is vital to everything I do, 'cause if I can't sell it, I can't buy the supplies to make more. I haven't really used Illustrator as a medium for a work like this before. It comes with some challenges, I think I might stick to more traditional medium until I get a better mastery of the program, or maybe I'll import my work into Painter to give it the feel I usually get in my work.
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