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As text, I have to say it did nothing for me. But for something like this, its all in how the actors play it, right expression, timing etc.
It could work brilliantly on film...but on the other hand it could fall flat on its face.
Good luck man!
Oh and if you can find a way, you should think of uploading an mpg of it for us to see it when its finished!
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