I wrote a paper in my entry level English class at Ohio State. It was about Racism vs. Segregation. I explained all the different racial tones that people can take towards different cultures, from making prejudicial assumptions. The comment I got was... "The point you are trying to make is quite controversial, I think you need to make less point on the fact that black people are discriminated against the most, and focus more on the smaller minorities." My teacher was a black woman, and I only stated black racism once in the whole paper, along with other minorities as well. But I do not know, I thought I stated both sides of the arguements very well. But then again... I am not the teacher.
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