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Something just ain't adding up here.
I apologize, up front, if I am wrong, but is this really about your mother or is it part of an email campaign regarding someone else?
I would refer to my mother, as my mother. Also, I would say she "passed away" rather than "expired". This looks like it was written by someone that knows medical terminology intimately.
My mother is dealing with cancer, so I don't feel like I am being heartless here. I just read this and question marks pop up in my head. (I'm also thinking shennanigans on the other thread too).
Is this really about your own mother?
If so, why the cold, non-emotional language? This looks more like a legal brief than a plea for help--usually pleas appeal to the emotional side of people--this one is almost too cold to have the appropriate emotional effect.
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