Hey. I'm all for reading...people need to do a lot more of it, in my opinion...You do write some very good work, however, many people are not as "well-read" as the general population once was and something as detailed and descriptive may be for heavier readers (some may be those who have collected and read every page of Stephen King; they have for years).
Your style of writing reminds me of a great author. Of course I'm referring to Stephen King. A lot of people enjoy his movies rather than his books...just something to think about, improve upon, and grow with. 
Whatever your decisions may be, don't give up on your writing. It's very good.
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