Originally Posted by exile2k4

Nice work. One thing you might want to try with the eyes is toning them down very slightly. Even though eyes are described as "white", even when a person's eyes are very bright it's usually a mid to low grey/blue/red colour. Even if someone's eyes are wide open and in fairly direct light, there tends to be a lot of shade from the eyelids/lashes/brows and the curve of the eye itself.