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Much better!
Some tweaks...
1) Increase, just slightly, the space between the Hear Ye and the Celtic Cross... just a tad
2) Decrease the size of the AND between your names... one or two sizes only... Keeps the emphasis on your names.
3) Try increasing, slightly, the size of ALONG WITH THEIR FAMILIES... If it looks odd change it back... I say this only because if they are in the same font size as everything else it might be seen as a slight.
Otherwise it's looking really nice.
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