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Originally Posted by maleficent
Take a few seconds and spell check the ad, and make sure that the sentence structure is correct.
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This was my first reaction also. I noticed a number of spelling errors which you need to clean up.
Now, as a disclaimer, you should still be truthful and not allow anyone to change who you are. With that being said (and don't forget, you asked)....
- Rewrite the stuff about your sense of humor. I haven't found very many women who want a guy who is proud of watching cartoons and liking cheesy jokes.
- There are still some women out there who like video games but again, I haven't found very many women who like to sit back and watch their man play the latest role playing game. Take it out and bring that up later.
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What are you hiding? An old lovers name on your ass? If you have something, at least put down that you have
A tatoo (she can see it later).
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turn-ons: Long hair, Skinny dipping, Flirting, Thrills, Money, Candlelight, Thunderstorms
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I find the skinny dipping and money entries as double edged entries. They can both hurt and help you, depending on who is reading the profile. I personally think that whether you like skinny dipping or not should become known after you establish the relationship. I see some women being very cautions because they never know when you are going to spring a skinny dipping date on them. Money as a turn on (again, to me) seems shallow. According to your profile, you will accept anyone who makes from $25,001 on up. So why are you making a statement that the more money the better?
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Everyone has turn-offs. Even if it's bad breath, demanding personalities, etc.