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Old 01-17-2005, 03:47 PM   #5 (permalink)
sailor
beauty in the breakdown
 
Location: Chapel Hill, NC
One thing, and dont take this personally--learn how to write a bit better. It took me three times to understand all of that post, and if you are trying to get money, or even sell anything, if someone sees writing like that, they will run far, far away. I know I wouldnt buy from someone whose brochures/information/whatever were full of grammatical and spelling errors. Maybe its just because you are writing online and therefore not really thinking about it, but even so, you need to learn to express yourself a bit better.
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