amonkie

I love rain, and your use of that in both really caught my attention In the first one, I love the imagery that you use to develop the man - I'd love to see more of that idea expounded. The vagueness is almost too much to the point that it doesn't keep your interest without a little more description or thought to "hook" you.

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