Thanks for your informative reply. In response to the note to be taken serious dealy, the song is a bit of a mokcery to rap, but I feel that witha bit more work it can actually be turned into a positive note. It was written for fun. The message is kind of clear to me I think. Yes the song is messy here and there but I meant for it to be that way. Kind of having two faces almost. Me and my friend sang it to make it sound more two dimensional. Indeed the song needs a bit more work, and with time I'll actually put it to a beat!
