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Old 12-21-2004, 05:31 AM   #2 (permalink)
K-Wise
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At the time, I did not believe my father,
shook my head as he told me
that a man is most pure on his own,
when left to the sound of his breathing,
whetted with drink and shadow.

At the time I did not understand his silence,
or his longing for my sleeping mother.
I really enjoyed those lines especially I can almost feel what he's feeling. Bowhunters daydream was also quite good with pretty vivid imagery...I don't drink so I can't relate to Scotch but it read well as well. Enjoyable reads I'll be sure to look out for more.

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