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I mean this with the utmost sincerity:
You need to consider serious writing. that is quite possibly one of the funniest little stories I’ve ever read.
Pure delight!
At the very least, submit it to readers digest or something, they’ll want the language cleaned up a tad but it won’t take away from the writing at all.
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SWM, tattooed, seeks meaningful tits and beer. Enjoys biker mags, pornography, and Sunday morning walks to the liquor store. Winners of erotic hot dog eating contests given priority.
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