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Nancy · 12-02-2004, 11:05 AM

holy shit that's awesome!

The third one looks perfect but I do see some "errors" in the others.

1# Her left wrist/lower part of the arm looks kinda fat compared to the upper part of the arm. And the string on the bra seems to just suddenly stop. The rest is hiding behind her muscles because of the particular pose I assume but I think you should have brought that out just a tad more

3# The black area (eye lids) on her right eye is too big compared to the left.

4# The same problem as in 3#. I really miss some life in those eyes. You do an EXCELLENT job of making detailed, realistic lips, eyes etc but the eyes looks kinda foggy/dead to me.

12-02-2004, 11:05 AM	#6 (permalink)
Nancy Femme Fatale Location: Elysium	holy shit that's awesome! The third one looks perfect but I do see some "errors" in the others. 1# Her left wrist/lower part of the arm looks kinda fat compared to the upper part of the arm. And the string on the bra seems to just suddenly stop. The rest is hiding behind her muscles because of the particular pose I assume but I think you should have brought that out just a tad more 3# The black area (eye lids) on her right eye is too big compared to the left. 4# The same problem as in 3#. I really miss some life in those eyes. You do an EXCELLENT job of making detailed, realistic lips, eyes etc but the eyes looks kinda foggy/dead to me. __________________ I have all the characteristics of a human being: blood, flesh, skin, hair; but not a single, clear, identifiable emotion, except for greed and disgust. Something horrible is happening inside of me and I don't know why. My nightly bloodlust has overflown into my days. I feel lethal, on the verge of frenzy. I think my mask of sanity is about to slip.