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Old 11-29-2004, 05:16 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Sounds like a viscious cycle. Good poem I enjoyed it. Rare for me with really short poems but that was the perfect length for this one. You couldn't have added any more or less. Again good job man. I'll keep a lookout for more of your work.

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