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Hi. I see no-one else has commented and as this happened to me I hope you will appreciate feedback. I like sci fi and would like to know what is happening to the animals etc. I have to confess i found some parts a bit lengthy i.e. lots of words, not much action. Maybe it needs more detail, more hints as to what is happening? I'm an amateur so feel free to dismiss my comments. Good Luck.
One of my stories looked really bunched up too but my other story was double-spaced and looked much better.
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