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I think you're going in the right direction with the style - I read the Howl poem (had to look up Moloch), and he seems to throw together things you wouldn't normally associate together, and your poems seems to reflect that. Kudos for taking up a challenge!
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Calling from deep in the heart, from where the eyes can't see and the ears can't hear, from where the mountain trails end and only love can go... ~~~ Three Rivers Hare Krishna
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