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Thanks for the input. At first I thought "Managed to read to the end! That's good?". But I agree the end was abrupt. I think I knew that but I didn't know where to go with it. I've now thought of another paragraph which completes the story, I think.(Luke puts things right and recalls alll the pcs-faulty parts). I will be putting another story on here shortly. I would appreciate your comments. Cheers!
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